Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Expressing Concern

123 Main Street
Sportstown, British Columbia
V2A 1W3

Mr. Kleats
Central High School
123 Main Street
V2A 1W3

May 25

Dear Mr. Kleats
My name is Chase McKenzie, I currently have a child playing on your High school chess team. Being a coach requires an extensive amount of time and energy and I appreciate the amount of time you have put in; however I do have some concerns. I have noticed on occasion you have been tardy to the practices and often to the games. Many students during practice seem to be uninformed om what they are supposed to be doing. I believe if you set out a structured practice plan it would be beneficial to the team.

Some of the students i have observed have received small amounts of playing time, and you seem to lean towards only playing the better players. All the students need equal playing time and you shouldn't focus solely on winning. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter, I hope we can get past these concerns and move on to becoming a successful chess team.

Sincerely

Chase McKenzie

1 comment:

  1. 2 of 3 assignments complete. Tone of letter is quite diplomatic. Topic for satirical essay is good. Both could use more detail and further proofreading.

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